From 0d569ccf56bdde87015d79523fabb050239092dc Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Zoltan Timar <zoltan.timar.work@gmail.com>
Date: Wed, 29 Apr 2026 23:20:04 +0200
Subject: [PATCH] correcting bugs and texts

---
 inc/discussion/discussion.sumphore.lua | 13 +++++++------
 inc/screen/screen.mysterious_man.lua   | 24 ++++++++++++++++--------
 2 files changed, 23 insertions(+), 14 deletions(-)

diff --git a/inc/discussion/discussion.sumphore.lua b/inc/discussion/discussion.sumphore.lua
index fa27351..b7d3eac 100644
--- a/inc/discussion/discussion.sumphore.lua
+++ b/inc/discussion/discussion.sumphore.lua
@@ -124,24 +124,25 @@ Discussion.register({
   on_end = Meter.apply_sumphore_discussion_reward,
   steps = {
     {
-      question = "You saw something you weren't supposed to, didn't you.",
+      question = "You saw the seams, didn't you. Good. That means the work is finally wearing thin.",
       answers = {
-        { label = "I don't know what you mean.", next_step = 2 },
+        { label = "Wearing thin how?", next_step = 2 },
         { label = "Maybe.", next_step = 2 },
       },
     },
     {
-      question = "The world around you has seams. Your coworkers slip sometimes. Say things that don't quite fit.",
+      question = "Not your body. The part of you that still keeps score, still tries to be productive. Let that run empty and the world will slip again.",
       answers = {
-        { label = "They seem fine to me.", next_step = nil },
+        { label = "You want me to stop trying?", next_step = 3 },
         { label = "I've noticed something odd.", next_step = 3 },
       },
     },
     {
-      question = "Count those moments. Six of them should be enough to see the whole picture.",
+      question = "Drain the work out of yourself. When that measure hits nothing, you'll see what was waiting behind it.",
       answers = {
-        { label = "Six of what, exactly?", next_step = nil, on_select = function()
+        { label = "The work measure?", next_step = nil, on_select = function()
           Meter.add("ism", 5)
+          Meter.add("wpm", -100)
         end },
         { label = "How would you know any of this?", next_step = nil },
       },
diff --git a/inc/screen/screen.mysterious_man.lua b/inc/screen/screen.mysterious_man.lua
index 1219aa3..125dcaf 100644
--- a/inc/screen/screen.mysterious_man.lua
+++ b/inc/screen/screen.mysterious_man.lua
@@ -94,7 +94,9 @@ local ASC_78_TEXT = [[
 
 local ASC_89_TEXT = [[
   Norman
-  
+
+
+
   you created this simulation 
   
   in the first place.
@@ -109,20 +111,26 @@ local ASC_89_TEXT = [[
   
   have forgoten that.
 
+
+
+
   But 
   
+
+
+
   it doesn't matter anymore.
 
 
 
 
-  You actually are more
+  You are definitely
 
-  than you think you are.
+  not an impostor.
   
 
   
-  so now
+  So now,
 
 
 
@@ -132,17 +140,17 @@ local ASC_89_TEXT = [[
   
   before it takes over
 
-  the world
+  the world.
   
 
 
 
-  also,
+  One more thing:
 
 
 
 
-  you really need to stop
+  You really need to stop
   
   talking to yourself 
   
@@ -332,7 +340,7 @@ Screen.register({
           lines = lines + 1
         end
 
-        local skippable = Ascension.get_level() ~= 8
+        local skippable = Ascension.get_level() < 8
         if text_y < -lines * 8 or (skippable and Input.select()) then
           text_done = true
           text_done_timer = TEXT_DONE_HOLD_SECONDS